10k Philosophy challenge Dan, I am not a professional philosopher, but here are my thoughts on the document you posted:
As I read, I asked myself, how do you define "good?" It seemed to me that you went on to answer this question. It is as if you had said, "the good is when someone is maximally free, and free of any constraints on their choices; the freedom to make choices is good." But then you asked a question about weighing freedoms and about the "importance" of choices. And I found myself very much with the same question I had started with. The "freedom is good" paradigm seems to require further criteria that make the consequence good that is quite separate from the freedom derived as a consequence, an independent standard for the rightness or wrongness of a consequence. But isn't that antithetical to the freedom consequentialist project? If freedom does not make a consequence good, what does?
That being said, it is easy to be a critic of another's writing and there may be nuances to your view that I didn't catch.
Anyways, thanks for sharing the idea.
P.S. This comment is from someone who is skeptical that a comprehensive moral theory is ever forthcoming.