It is not clear what your objective is. Do you want to learn how to diagram sentences more effectively, or do you want to learn how to write more effectively?
If sentence analysis is your goal, then get one book on English grammar and a second book on sentence diagramming and have a ball. What sentence diagramming does for one's writing ability is teach you how to be critical of your sentence structure. Sentence analysis is useful, until it becomes "second nature".
If more effective writing is your goal, then get a book on writing style and practice, practice, practice. The Elements of Style by Strunk and White is an old standby (meaning, many writers stand by its usefulness). It's a small book with pithy content.
It's a bit difficult to assess your writing skill by using your consistently very short posts as samples.
Just got off the line with her. She mainly complained about having a failure of a son who still hasn't left home and spends all his time being a cocky twat on the philosophy forum whilst maintaining he has a 'business' and is trying to 'expand' said 'business'
yeah, sorry. I've got a few friends who listen to his stuff and I just quietly believe them to be morons because of it. Jon Oliver is pretty good agreed
Apologies, I didn't want to cause any inconvenience for the mods. It's just the easiest and aptest way to respond to the poster in question.
Thanks for the link, going to send it to a few Kool-aid drinking friends. Also, 'Ethereum' sounds like an element
well if he's in Exeter then that's a marginal seat
Your short posts are generally conversational in style which is fine when you are writing "casual text". The samples here does not pass muster for formal writing. For instance:
I think that "well if he's in Exeter then that's a marginal seat" conveys meaning quite clearly. Conversational style is often quite effective; but its informal sound is wrong for some purposes. "Exeter is a marginal seat, if that is where he is." comes closer. "If he wins in Exeter, he will win a marginal seat." is the best formal revision I could write.
two errors: "Well," should be capitalized and should be followed by a comma. Why should it be followed by a comma? I can't remember the rule, but there is one. I'll make one up here: "When you begin a sentence with purposeless words such as
so, well, you know, or fuck. it should be followed by a comma."
Some individual rules apply to many situations. For instance,
Avoid the passive voice. Passive voice example:
The dinner will be cooked by the hotel staff. Active voice example:
The hotel staff will cook the dinner.
So, [meaningless phrase followed by comma] you might try
this site. Why this one? It's the first one that popped up in a Google search. There are lots of on-line grammar sites.
English Grammar 101 is another site. That one also popped up first, and it happens to review all the basic grammar terms.
My personal advice: Write a lot more. Write a journal, or some such thing, as practice.