We all have on average the same nervous system, the same type of brain, the same intellectual and emotional profile
What about mentally ill people and those with personality disorders?
Making sure that populations are empowered by education to reach maximum achievement rather than hampered by an inadequate system is also an important concern. Enhancing medical treatment and technology in general is vital to the prospects for quality of life.
This is exceedingly obvious and doesn't need to be stated in my opinion.
This:
Assuring we do not destroy ourselves with our own technological development is a salient dilemma.
is somewhat interesting.
what detracts from one life detracts from every life in approximately equal measure.
You are really making quite a claim there. Being deprived of social media might be devastating to one person but not to another. I think you must mention privations.
Commonalities of need informing civilized social relationships and the mechanisms of institutions have obtained for roughly ten thousand years, while the window of time within which human decision-makers must exercise themselves to apply and augment social factors in institutional contexts is only a few generations at the most, a fraction of the single lifespan.
Are you saying that people have not acted within institutions to bring about changes in social norms or to change those institutions until less than one lifespan ago? I don't really have any idea what you're trying to say here.
What is this:
evolutionary relativism
to cover their asses
You cannot say this in a scholarly essay.
prevent this rampant destructiveness
Where did this come from? Why are you just mentioning it at the end of the essay?
I tried very hard to understand your essay but it just doesn't make sense to me. Sweeping claims are made with no evidence, such as those about human nature, and the language is muddled. I would recommend sticking closer to a functional thesis. Sorry.