Get Creative!
I've never loved spoken word over music, but you're definitely a poet.
:clap: It's purely personal preference, but I'd love to read the text as a poem. I always enjoy a little lo-fi (music) though, so I enjoyed it overall. The backing music reminded me of simpler times in my life.
Take care! I can now imagine your actual voice saying "so long, Philosophy Forum!" (also love your Pittsburg accent).