It's going to be fairly direct because we get a lot of stuff like this, especially in Philosophy of Religion, and I would like it to stop, so it's not just aimed at you, it's not meant to sound as harsh as it probably will, and there's no need to be discouraged by it. I'll try to give a bit of help after the critique.
Your OP:
Can God kill himself?
Does our ability to contemplate suicide and then carry it out suggest a measure of profound development in our evolution? Is it the ultimate act of a conscious being, to turn back on itself, to destroy what it is?
Animals don’t seem to do it, (I’ve heard of things, but the evidence is hazy) and if they could how would they do it, a gun, a knife? Are they even aware that they have a life that can be taken, let alone take it themselves?
And, in evolutionary terms how did this happen, why does suicide exist? Isn’t it contrary to the fight for life, ending the trajectory of your own genes? — Brett
So...
Can God kill himself?
My first thought: If you believe in God, the question doesn't arise. If you don't, it doesn't matter.
Does our ability to contemplate suicide and then carry it out suggest a measure of profound development in our evolution?
Relevance to questionably relevant OP not established.
Is it the ultimate act of a conscious being, to turn back on itself, to destroy what it is?
I have no idea why it would be. Is it the ultimate act of a conscious being to wear shorts? Have you got something of substance to say here?
Animals don’t seem to do it, (I’ve heard of things, but the evidence is hazy)
So, do they or not? And it's relevant why?
and if they could how would they do it, a gun, a knife?
That might be hard for a penguin. I would suggest neither.
Are they even aware that they have a life that can be taken, let alone take it themselves?
Don't ask us. We're still trying to figure out the God-animal connection here.
And, in evolutionary terms how did this happen, why does suicide exist? Isn’t it contrary to the fight for life, ending the trajectory of your own genes?
For who? I thought animals didn't do it. And God didn't evolve. Oh, we're talking about people now. So go on then.
Wait, that's it?
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How to improve it:
THE QUESTION
If you don't have a clear well thought-out question or claim, you don't have an OP. So, have one and one of some importance (at least to you) in mind. And know and be able to explain why it's important as its importance might be questioned.
THE CONTENT
One easy way to structure an OP based on a question is as follows:
a)
Background information
- What is the question and the context of the question (historical or otherwise)?
- Is the question very controversial? If so, why?
- How have others answered the question?
- What's your motivation for asking the question?
etc.
(This is all part of establishing why we should care about the question)
b)
Thesis
What is
your position on the question?
(You don't have to go into full detail here as you can do that as the discussion progresses, but you could give a summary of the main reasons for your stance.)
c)
Lead in
What do you want from the discussion?
Make any clarifications you need to here. (For example, if people commonly answer this question with a misunderstanding, here's your chance to head it off at the pass).
And maybe most of all,
your OP should be about a specific clearly-defined topic that you stick to. If you can't even stay on topic in the first post, it's already a bust.
You can do all that and do it well in as little as 200 words.
Hope that helps.