Original Philosophical Investigation series — Author
Here we go… — Author
Prelude:
Explain the feelings of Spring Fever, Summer Joy, Autumn Color, and Winter Rest.
A kind of pyramid is envisioned, with two oppositionals and two transitionals that cross to generate the humans’ being, via this and additional pairings of necessity derived that are basic, not complicated.
Original Philosophical Investigation series — Author
The Now we know spans wider than we think,
As consciousness takes time to form its link;
Each present moment born from what has died,
As past dissolves in memory’s swift sink. — Moliere
and beautiful passagesWe chase our shadows round the cosmic hall,
Like cats that chase their tails and sometimes fall;
Not seeing that the watcher and the watched
Are one same dance against existence’s wall. — Moliere
Dreams are the starlight of our minds’ vast night,
A scattered glory burning clear and bright;
Above the mundane world of daily tasks,
They spread their constellations of delight. — Moliere
It covers more territory than any poem or prose piece I've ever read.Like trees that slumbered through the frozen night,
My spirit wakes to touch the growing light;
Each cell remembers ancient rhythms true,
As winter’s dormant dreams take verdant flight. — Moliere
It covers more territory than any poem or prose piece I've ever read.
I'm impressed by the ambition, the audacity and the sheer quantity of work that went into this entry.
:clap: :clap: :clap: — Vera Mont
Many questions of matter, time and space, when, where etc. crisscross and merge in my mind as total confusion. Perhaps, that's the idea. Perhaps, a diagram would help. — Amity
But do not neglect basic rhythm-rhyme — Moliere
The world's ineluctable poetry
rather than being said is better seen — Moliere
tackle just one of these parts and turn it into some sort of structure — Moliere
I think that for a poetic philosophy structure is very important to pay attention to. — Moliere
The poems are ten-syllable Rubaiyat-style (as I have extended The Rubaiyat); easy to contain with one breath. — PoeticUniverse
I'm open to suggestion; do you have any in mind? — PoeticUniverse
But it takes a lot of time to focus in on phonic structure while also making sense so I thought only 1 part of this epic would be enough of a challenge. — Moliere
I think iambic pentameter works well in English — Moliere
Whenever I write a poem I try to think about it as something that will be spoken -- so that the written poem is more like a musical score than the poem, something to be performed rather than read. — Moliere
Such as changing it to a dialogue? Or to another structure? Suggestions? — PoeticUniverse
iambic pentameter — Moliere
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