• Questioner
    362
    This thread is for posting your favourite poems, whether it is by a famous poet, or one you just found about yesterday, or a poem you wrote yourself. Commentary about what the poem means to you is encouraged, but not mandatory.

    Also – commentary from any readers moved by the poem is also welcomed.

    Let’s keep the thread positive – no critique, please.
  • Questioner
    362
    Sometimes I think about the millions of years of happenstance that led to my being born here and now. My existence depends on uncountable events that came before, from a supernova that exploded in this part of the universe around 5 billion years ago, to the formation of the Sun and planets, and photosynthesis evolving on the third planet and oxygen filling the air and fins evolving into limbs …. Fast forward … to my ancient ancestors surviving the passage out of Africa, and thousands of generations successfully passing on their genes … right up to my mother meeting my father.

    I am a child of the universe. I am a child of chance. And this poem makes me think of the long, precarious voyage from then to now, and that there is still time, while I am alive, to grow.

    HOMO SAPIENS: CREATING THEMSELVES
    by Pattiann Rogers

    I.
    Formed in the black-light center of a star-circling
    galaxy; formed in whirlpool images of froth
    and flume and fulcrum; in the center image of herring
    circling like pieces of silver swirling fast, a shoaling
    circle of deception; in the whirlpool perfume of sex
    in the deepest curve of a lily’s soft corolla. Created
    within the images of the creator’s creation.

    Born with the same grimacing wrench of a tree-covered
    cliff split wide suddenly by lightning and opened
    to thundering clouds of hail and rain.

    Cured in the summer sun as if in a potter’s oven,
    polished like a stone rolled by a river, emboldened
    by the image of the expanse beyond earth’s horizon,
    inside and outside a circumference in the image
    of freedom.

    Given the image of starlight clusters steadily silent
    above a hillside-silence of fallen snow… let there be sleep.

    II.
    Inheriting from the earth’s scrambling minions,
    images of thorn and bur, fang and claw, stealth,
    deceit, poison, camouflage, blade, and blood…
    let there be suffering, let there be survival.

    Shaped by the image of the onset and unstoppable
    devouring eclipse of the sun, the tempestuous, ecliptic
    eating of the moon, the volcanic explosions of burning
    rocks and fiery hail of ashes to death… let there be
    terror and tears. Let there be pity.

    Created in the image of fear inside a crawfish
    skittering backward through a freshwater stream
    with all eight appendages in perfect coordination,
    both pincers held high, backing into safety beneath
    a fallen leaf refuge… let there be home.

    III.
    Made in the image of the moon, where else
    would the name of ivory rock craters shine
    except in our eyes… let there be language.
    Displayed in the image of the rotting seed
    on the same stem with the swelling blossom…
    let there be hope.

    Homo sapiens creating themselves after the manner
    and image of the creator’s ongoing creation — slowly,
    eventual, alert and imagined, composing, dissembling,
    until the right chord sounds from one brave strum
    of the right strings reverberating, fading away
    like evening… let there be pathos, let there be
    compassion, forbearance, forgiveness. Let there be
    weightless beauty.

    Of earth and sky, Homo sapiens creating themselves,
    following the mode and model of the creator’s creation,
    particle by particle, quest by quest, witness by witness,
    even though the unknown far away and the unknown
    nearby be seen and not seen… let there be goodwill
    and accounting
    , let there be praise resounding.


    You can listen to the poem recited on YouTube:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1tvk0NJ4fM
  • AmadeusD
    4k
    "I sat all morning in the college sick bay
    Counting bells knelling classes to a close.
    At two o'clock our neighbours drove me home.

    In the porch I met my father crying—
    He had always taken funerals in his stride—
    And Big Jim Evans saying it was a hard blow.

    The baby cooed and laughed and rocked the pram
    When I came in, and I was embarrassed
    By old men standing up to shake my hand

    And tell me they were 'sorry for my trouble'.
    Whispers informed strangers I was the eldest,
    Away at school, as my mother held my hand

    In hers and coughed out angry tearless sighs.
    At ten o'clock the ambulance arrived
    With the corpse, stanched and bandaged by the nurses.

    Next morning I went up into the room. Snowdrops
    And candles soothed the bedside; I saw him
    For the first time in six weeks. Paler now,

    Wearing a poppy bruise on his left temple,
    He lay in the four-foot box as in his cot.
    No gaudy scars, the bumper knocked him clear.

    A four-foot box, a foot for every year."

    - Seamus Heaney, Mid-Term Break
    ------
    Devastating.
  • Questioner
    362
    Devastating.AmadeusD

    Thanks for sharing. yes, devastating. Nothing more devastating than the death of a child.

    There's a real sense of not being able to make any sense of what he was experiencing.

    I had to look it up. Heaney wrote this poem about the death of his four-year-old brother, who had been hit by a car.
  • RogueAI
    3.5k
    The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner
    By Randall Jarrell

    From my mother’s sleep I fell into the State,
    And I hunched in its belly till my wet fur froze.
    Six miles from earth, loosed from its dream of life,
    I woke to black flak and the nightmare fighters.
    When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose.
  • Questioner
    362
    The Death of the Ball Turret GunnerRogueAI

    It's short, but it hits hard. I immediately thought of a soldier at war.

    Sometimes I feel like the lessons of WW2 have been forgotten.
  • Ecurb
    92
    Here's one for a philosophy forum.

    Crime Club
    by Weldon Kees

    No butler, no second maid, no blood upon the stair.
    No eccentric aunt, no gardener, no family friend
    Smiling among the bric-a-brac and murder.
    Only a suburban house with the front door open
    And a dog barking at a squirrel, and the cars
    Passing. The corpse quite dead. The wife in Florida.

    Consider the clues: the potato masher in a vase,
    The torn photograph of a Wesleyan basketball team,
    Scattered with check stubs in the hall;
    The unsent fan letter to Shirley Temple,
    The Hoover button on the lapel of the deceased,
    The note: "To be killed this way is quite all right with me."

    Small wonder that the case remains unsolved,
    Or that the sleuth, Le Roux, is now incurably insane,
    And sits alone in a white room in a white gown,
    Screaming that all the world is mad, that clues
    Lead nowhere, or to walls so high their tops cannot be seen;
    Screaming all day of war, screaming that nothing can be solved
  • Jamal
    11.6k
    Sometimes I feel like the lessons of WW2 have been forgotten.Questioner

    Maybe it's worse than that: remembering them doesn't make any difference.


    Hawk Roosting by Ted Hughes

    I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes closed.
    Inaction, no falsifying dream
    Between my hooked head and hooked feet:
    Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and eat.

    The convenience of the high trees!
    The air's buoyancy and the sun's ray
    Are of advantage to me;
    And the earth's face upward for my inspection.

    My feet are locked upon the rough bark.
    It took the whole of Creation
    To produce my foot, my each feather:
    Now I hold Creation in my foot

    Or fly up, and revolve it all slowly -
    I kill where I please because it is all mine.
    There is no sophistry in my body:
    My manners are tearing off heads -

    The allotment of death.
    For the one path of my flight is direct
    Through the bones of the living.
    No arguments assert my right:

    The sun is behind me.
    Nothing has changed since I began.
    My eye has permitted no change.
    I am going to keep things like this.
  • Jamal
    11.6k
    Sometimes I feel like the lessons of WW2 have been forgotten.Questioner

    Maybe it's worse than that: remembering them doesn't make any difference.Jamal

    Come to think of it, maybe it's worse even than that: the only way the war can be remembered is wrongly, (e.g., as a moral fable, as good guys vs bad guys etc.) such that its repetition is inevitable.

    :grin:
  • Questioner
    362
    Here's one for a philosophy forum.

    Crime Club
    by Weldon Kees
    Ecurb

    Yes, that poem seems full of sub-text. I quite liked the story-telling aspect of it, and looked up the poet. Seems Kees "went missing" 1955 - never to be seen again. That fact makes you want to go back and re-read the poem and look for clues. Thanks for sharing it.
  • Questioner
    362
    its repetition is inevitable.Jamal

    the older I get, the more I realize that events down throughout history are constantly cycling, and we are in a precarious part of the cycle right now

    Hawk Roosting by Ted HughesJamal

    Birds have provided so much inspiration to poets!

    You have reminded me of a book published in 1877 - Birds and Poets

    Read online at the Gutenberg link - https://www.gutenberg.org/files/5177/5177-h/5177-h.htm

    Author John Burroughs begins with these lines -

    It might almost be said that the birds are all birds of the poets and of no one else, because it is only the poetical temperament that fully responds to them. So true is this, that all the great ornithologists—original namers and biographers of the birds—have been poets in deed if not in word. Audubon is a notable case in point, who, if he had not the tongue or the pen of the poet, certainly had the eye and ear and heart—"the fluid and attaching character"—and the singleness of purpose, the enthusiasm, the unworldliness, the love, that characterize the true and divine race of bards.
  • Ecurb
    92
    Seems Kees "went missing" 1955 - never to be seen again.Questioner

    Kees was a poet, a novelist, a musician and film maker. His car was found by the Golden Gate Bridge, and it was assumed he committed suicide -- but he had also talked about disappearing. HIs poems are dark. He's my favorite "beat" poet. .

    Here's another. I like the last line in this poem :

    The Patient Is Rallying

    Difficult to recall an emotion that is dead,
    Particularly so among these unbelieved fanfares
    And admonitions from a camouflaged sky.

    I should have remained burdened with destinations
    Perhaps, or stayed quite drunk, or obeyed
    The undertaker, who was fairly charming, after all.

    Or was there a room like that one, worn
    With our whispers, and a great tree blossoming
    Outside blue windows, warm rain blowing in the night?

    There seems to be some doubt. No doubt, however
    Of the chilled and emptied tissues of the mind
    --Cold, cold, a great grey winter entering--
    Like spines of air, frozen in an ice cube.
  • Questioner
    362
    He's my favorite "beat" poet. .Ecurb

    I once tried to read Kerouac's "On the Road" but didn't finish it.

    I like the last line in this poem :Ecurb

    A poet I am acquainted with said a poem should always end with "a turn" and I guess this line does that - with some striking imagery
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