The rhythm works better for me at the start than towards to the end. — Baden
I didn't get the intent of the format but it struck me as 'right' anyhow. And as I said I find that difficult. For example, I have a written version of the below (the first part of a longer poem) for which I've tried various formats none of which seem to work as well as just going at it verbally. — Baden
Picking his way along the path, avoiding the cracks, what? — Baden
Really appreciate your interest. You would probably see more than I consciously intended. It came out in bursts and seemed right and I'm aware of certain connections and meanings and it was kind of cathartic. Anyway, glad you got something from it. — Baden
I don't want to peddle representations poetically, I want to be able to do alchemy with them. — fdrake
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