• T Clark
    13.9k
    So, I’m going to start a new thread - Just Poetry. I wanted to start from scratch after fiddling around with “Philosophical Poems” for a while. I’m not going to use or pay attention to that thread any more.

    Just Poetry is here in the Lounge where it probably should be and where it will be lost forever unless someone works to keep it connected. My intention is to use the Shoutbox to let people know when there are new poems. It will be helpful if others do the same when they’ve added new stuff. A few rules:

    • Any poems you want, philosophical or not
    • Keep a limit on poetry you’ve written yourself. A few are ok, but this is primarily a thread for other poets. Real poets if you’ll forgive me.
    • Long poems are ok, but please hide all but the first few stanzas using the Hide and Reveal feature. That’s the eyeball at the top of the reply box.
    • Alternatively, for long poems you can put in a link to a webpage. The Poetry Foundation has a lot of poems posted.
    • Discussion is encouraged, but the emphasis should be on the poems themselves.

    So, to get started. I hate T.S. Elliot. I remember reading “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” back in high school. Hated it. So I decided I should read some Elliot to verify it was as bad as I remember. What the heck. It’s pretty good. Bleak but fun to read. Here’s a verse I liked.

    No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be;
    Am an attendant lord, one that will do
    To swell a progress, start a scene or two,
    Advise the prince; no doubt, an easy tool,
    Deferential, glad to be of use,
    Politic, cautious, and meticulous;
    Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse;
    At times, indeed, almost ridiculous—
    Almost, at times, the Fool.


    Here’s a link to the whole thing:

    https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/44212/the-love-song-of-j-alfred-prufrock

    That verse reminded me of a poem I like by one of my favorite poets, Carl Dennis. The poem is “Gifts” from “Ranking the Wishes.” Here’s the verse I thought of:

    Most days she may see herself as dodging her way
    Through a maze of traffic, a thin woman in a red raincoat
    Rushing so as not to be late for her next appointment.
    Now and then he helps her think of herself
    As one of those old churches that welcomed the work
    Of every sculptor who made an effort, who took pains.
    Some statues were given a niche in the entry arch
    Obvious to all visitors, and some a perch high up
    Visible to any monk in the choir
    Willing to crane his neck or to any angel
    Pausing among the rafters to rest
    Before darting away on another mission.


    Here’s the whole poem

    Reveal
    Though her feelings for the man across town
    Who writes her weekly are a tiny fraction
    Of his feelings for her, and will always be,
    She doesn’t return his letters unopened.
    It may do him good to believe she scans them
    All year long, even, as now, at tax time,
    A bookkeeper’s busiest season, her weeknights
    Commandeered by the office and many weekends.

    Half an hour with his thoughts on Sunday
    Hasn’t hurt her so far, or stowing them in a shoe box.
    And if April’s hard for her, it’s harder for him
    In his landscape business.
    His customers want new lawns.
    Lights are flashing on his phone when he gets home,
    His back aching, his clothes crusted. But the calls
    Must wait till he’s done with a paragraph
    For her eyes only on his luck with organic mixes.

    Now his news may bore her, granted, but on gray days
    When those who matter most don’t seem to value
    Her high regard as she’d like them to,
    It does her good to think of her photograph
    Commanding the messy desk of a practical man
    With taste and talent who feels compelled
    To practice the lonely art of non-reciprocity,
    An art that civilization requires for the virtues
    Of graciousness and gratitude to reach full flower.

    Yes, her busy schedule keeps her from visiting
    The shelf in her heart set aside for him
    As much as she’d like, but for all he knows
    She may be thinking of him this very minute.
    That’s reason enough for the sudden rush of joy
    She imagines descending on him out of nowhere
    As he makes a note to himself about grub control
    Or a lawn to be roto-tilled tomorrow and seeded.

    Most days she may see herself as dodging her way
    Through a maze of traffic, a thin woman in a red raincoat
    Rushing so as not to be late for her next appointment.
    Now and then he helps her think of herself
    As one of those old churches that welcomed the work
    Of every sculptor who made an effort, who took pains.
    Some statues were given a niche in the entry arch
    Obvious to all visitors, and some a perch high up
    Visible to any monk in the choir
    Willing to crane his neck or to any angel
    Pausing among the rafters to rest
    Before darting away on another mission.
  • BC
    13.6k
    I missed the Beats (beatniks) the first time around. They were 'too far out' for my midwestern mind in the 1960s. I don't love their poetry, their novels. In 1965 they would likely have sailed over my pumpkin head. Now I recognize in them a kindred spirit.


    A Supermarket in California

    BY ALLEN GINSBERG - 1955

    What thoughts I have of you tonight, Walt Whitman, for I walked down the sidestreets under the trees with a headache self-conscious looking at the full moon.
    In my hungry fatigue, and shopping for images, I went into the neon fruit supermarket, dreaming of your enumerations!
    What peaches and what penumbras! Whole families shopping at night! Aisles full of husbands! Wives in the avocados, babies in the tomatoes!—and you, Garcia Lorca, what were you doing down by the watermelons?

    I saw you, Walt Whitman, childless, lonely old grubber, poking among the meats in the refrigerator and eyeing the grocery boys.
    I heard you asking questions of each: Who killed the pork chops? What price bananas? Are you my Angel?
    I wandered in and out of the brilliant stacks of cans following you, and followed in my imagination by the store detective.
    We strode down the open corridors together in our solitary fancy tasting artichokes, possessing every frozen delicacy, and never passing the cashier.

    Where are we going, Walt Whitman? The doors close in an hour. Which way does your beard point tonight?
    (I touch your book and dream of our odyssey in the supermarket and feel absurd.)
    Will we walk all night through solitary streets? The trees add shade to shade, lights out in the houses, we'll both be lonely.
    Will we stroll dreaming of the lost America of love past blue automobiles in driveways, home to our silent cottage?
    Ah, dear father, graybeard, lonely old courage-teacher, what America did you have when Charon quit poling his ferry and you got out on a smoking bank and stood watching the boat disappear on the black waters of Lethe?

    Berkeley, 1955
    Allen

    "Howl" is maybe his most famous poem; Here is the link to the Poetry Foundation text. Below is a link to Ginsburg reading the poem. I honestly don't know if the poetry is better coming out of the authors mouth or not.

    Howl, read by Allan Ginsburg
  • Jamal
    9.6k
    Hawk Roosting by Ted Hughes

    I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes closed.
    Inaction, no falsifying dream
    Between my hooked head and hooked feet:
    Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and eat.

    The convenience of the high trees!
    The air's buoyancy and the sun's ray
    Are of advantage to me;
    And the earth's face upward for my inspection.

    My feet are locked upon the rough bark.
    It took the whole of Creation
    To produce my foot, my each feather:
    Now I hold Creation in my foot

    Or fly up, and revolve it all slowly -
    I kill where I please because it is all mine.
    There is no sophistry in my body:
    My manners are tearing off heads -

    The allotment of death.
    For the one path of my flight is direct
    Through the bones of the living.
    No arguments assert my right:

    The sun is behind me.
    Nothing has changed since I began.
    My eye has permitted no change.
    I am going to keep things like this.

    ------------

    It shows how undeveloped my appreciation of poetry is that the poem I've chosen is one that I posted about back on the old forum. It's still the only one I know well.

    As I said back then, I find it frustrating that the internet is full of allegorical interpretations of this poem, the hawk representing the Nazis or violent destructive humanity, for example. But it's not an allegory. I find myself wondering if the people who interpet it that way have ever seen a hawk before. Probably what's happening is that with the wider exposure to literary and film and art criticism that's been enabled by the internet, bad interpretations abound, with some folks apparently thinking that a non-allegorical interpretation of any work of art is simple-minded.

    But it's the other way around. Hughes is describing what he appears to be describing, and that's hard. It's about a hawk, and as he said himself later, about nature in general.

    I'm pretty much with Tolkien, although I'm not sure about "in all its manifestations":

    I cordially dislike allegory in all its manifestations, and always have done so since I grew old and wary enough to detect its presence. I much prefer history – true or feigned– with its varied applicability to the thought and experience of readers. I think that many confuse applicability with allegory, but the one resides in the freedom of the reader, and the other in the purposed domination of the author. — Tolkien

    But there's a deep difficulty about the poem, the thing that makes it interesting. The poem doesn't take the form of the poet's observations. It's the hawk talking, with some level of human-style self-awareness. To show the purity of an animal in contrast to the artifice of human lives (at least as the hawk sees it), but using a human point of view, is quite something. It's anthropomorphism but doesn't feel like it.

    One thing about it I don't understand. Maybe poetry heads here can help. I think I get the full stops, but some of the other punctuation seems arbitrary to me. But it must be very deliberate.
  • Janus
    16.3k
    For me, the Beats are represented Gary Snyder is a more significant exemplar of the Beats aesthetic than Ginsberg. Kerouac and Snyder were strong influences on me in my late teens:


    The Bath

    Washing Kai in the sauna,
    The kerosene lantern set on a box
    outside the ground-level window,
    Lights up the edge of the iron stove and the
    washtub down on the slab
    Steaming air and crackle of waterdrops
    brushed by on the pile of rocks on top
    He stands in warm water
    Soap all over the smooth of his thigh and stomach
    “Gary don’t soap my hair!”
    —his eye-sting fear—
    the soapy hand feeling
    through and around the globes and curves of his body
    up in the crotch,
    And washing-tickling out the scrotum, little anus,
    his penis curving up and getting hard
    as I pull back skin and try to wash it
    Laughing and jumping, flinging arms around,
    I squat all naked too,
    is this our body?

    Sweating and panting in the stove-steam hot-stone
    cedar-planking wooden bucket water-splashing
    kerosene lantern-flicker wind-in-the-pines-out
    sierra forest ridges night—
    Masa comes in, letting fresh cool air
    sweep down from the door
    a deep sweet breath
    And she tips him over gripping neatly, one knee down
    her hair falling hiding one whole side of
    shoulder, breast, and belly,
    Washes deftly Kai’s head-hair
    as he gets mad and yells—
    The body of my lady, the winding valley spine,
    the space between the thighs I reach through,
    cup her curving vulva arch and hold it from behind,
    a soapy tickle a hand of grail
    The gates of Awe
    That open back a turning double-mirror world of
    wombs in wombs, in rings,
    that start in music,
    is this our body?

    The hidden place of seed
    The veins net flow across the ribs, that gathers
    milk and peaks up in a nipple—fits
    our mouth—
    The sucking milk from this our body sends through
    jolts of light; the son, the father,
    sharing mother’s joy
    That brings a softness to the flower of the awesome
    open curling lotus gate I cup and kiss
    As Kai laughs at his mother’s breast he now is weaned
    from, we
    wash each other,
    this our body

    Kai’s little scrotum up close to his groin,
    the seed still tucked away, that moved from us to him
    In flows that lifted with the same joys forces
    as his nursing Masa later,
    playing with her breast,
    Or me within her,
    Or him emerging,
    this is our body:

    Clean, and rinsed, and sweating more, we stretch
    out on the redwood benches hearts all beating
    Quiet to the simmer of the stove,
    the scent of cedar
    And then turn over,
    murmuring gossip of the grasses,
    talking firewood,
    Wondering how Gen’s napping, how to bring him in
    soon wash him too—
    These boys who love their mother
    who loves men, who passes on
    her sons to other women;

    The cloud across the sky. The windy pines.
    the trickle gurgle in the swampy meadow

    this is our body.

    Fire inside and boiling water on the stove
    We sigh and slide ourselves down from the benches
    wrap the babies, step outside,

    black night & all the stars.

    Pour cold water on the back and thighs
    Go in the house—stand steaming by the center fire
    Kai scampers on the sheepskin
    Gen standing hanging on and shouting,

    “Bao! bao! bao! bao! bao!”

    This is our body. Drawn up crosslegged by the flames
    drinking icy water
    hugging babies, kissing bellies,

    Laughing on the Great Earth

    Come out from the bath.
  • T Clark
    13.9k
    A Supermarket in California

    BY ALLEN GINSBERG - 1955
    Bitter Crank

    As Charles Montgomery Burns says, "I don't know art, but I know what I hate, and I don't hate that." It's well written and clear. The language is visually evocative and also "poetic." I get lost in poems where there isn't a strong rhythm guiding the way. When there isn't one, I find myself saying "Is this really poetry?" I often find it unsatisfying.

    Rereading my post it seems to me I must like the poem after all. I really do feel myself in the supermarket. I can smell the produce and feel the cold when I walk through the freezer section.
  • T Clark
    13.9k
    As I said back then, I find it frustrating that the internet is full of allegorical interpretations of this poem, the hawk representing the Nazis or violent destructive humanity, for example. But it's not an allegory. I find myself wondering if the people who interpet it that way have ever seen a hawk before. Probably what's happening is that with the wider exposure to literary and film and art criticism that's been enabled by the internet, bad interpretations abound, with some folks apparently thinking that a non-allegorical interpretation of any work of art is simple-minded.jamalrob

    I like the poem a lot. It's very sensual. As you note - it says what it means and it means what it says. Nothing hidden here. Not an allegory.

    I have also been frustrated, and often amused, by interpretations of Robert Frost poems. One in particular I remember was an interpretation of a poem written in 1915 that was identified as an example of Frost's proto-postmodernism. And there was the interpretation of "A Dust of Snow" in which the author referenced "hemlock" as a symbol for death, unaware that the "hemlock" Frost was referring to was a North American evergreen, not a toxic bush used for making poison.

    I cordially dislike allegory in all its manifestations, — Tolkien

    I do have some sympathy for digging into the language of a poem looking for deeper meanings. I remember an interpretation of Frost's "Wild Grapes" that identified and explained some of Frost's allusions to Greek myths. It added depth and perspective without changing my basic understanding of the poem.
  • Jamal
    9.6k
    I do have some sympathy for digging into the language of a poem looking for deeper meanings. I remember an interpretation of Frost's "Wild Grapes" that identified and explained some of Frost's allusions to Greek myths. It added depth and perspective without changing my basic understanding of the poem.T Clark

    Yeah I'm all for digging into the language for deeper meanings in the way you describe. But the habit of identifying allegory and symbolic schemes in works of art that I see so much of seems much more primitive and lazy than that.

    I'm not familiar with Robert Frost. Basically I know some Ted Hughes poems and this one by Ezra Pound:

    In a Station of the Metro

    The apparition of these faces in the crowd:
    Petals on a wet, black bough.

    ----------------

    I always seem to go for the nature imagery.

    I find it hard to get along with anything that rhymes. It's hard for me to grasp. I can't do the rhythms and absorb the meaning at the same time. It never feels right.
  • T Clark
    13.9k
    Good poem - "Reason." Good poet - Carl Dennis.

    I hope I never speak ill of you,
    Dependable homely friend who prods me gently
    To turn to the hour that’s now arriving,
    Not to the hour I let slip by
    Twenty years back. No way now, you say,
    To welcome a friend I failed to welcome
    When she returned to town in sorrow,
    Fresh from her discovery that the man
    Who seemed to outshine all the others
    Could also cast the densest shade.

    You’re right to label it magical thinking
    When I say to a phantom what I never said
    To flesh and blood, as if the words, repeated enough,
    Could somehow work their way back to an old page
    And nudge the silence aside and settle in, a delusion
    Not appropriate for a man no longer young
    At the end of a century where many nations
    Have set many things in motion they can’t call back
    Though the vote for reversal is unanimous.

    I’m glad you ask, clear-sighted Reason,
    Before what audience, if my speech can’t reach her ears,
    I imagine myself performing. Who is it
    I want to convince I’d do things differently
    This time around if the chance were offered.
    You’re right to say that half an hour a day is enough
    For these gods or angels to get the point
    If they’re ever going to get it, which is doubtful.
    Right again that if part of myself
    After all my efforts still needs convincing
    I should leave that dullard behind
    With the empty dream of wholeness and move on.

    I should move along the road that is not the road
    I’d be moving along had I said what I didn’t say
    To someone who might have been ready to listen,
    But a road as good, you assure me, Reason,
    One that might lead to a life I can be proud of
    So the man I might have been can’t pity me.
    Thanks for contending I can solve the problems
    He may have wanted to solve but hadn’t the time for,
    Preoccupied as he was with another life,
    The one I too might be caught up in
    Had I heard the words you now speak clearly
    Just as clearly long ago.
  • Verdi
    116
    I always love to listen to sung poetry.

    Shiny, shiny, shiny boots of leather
    Whiplash girl child in the dark
    Comes in bells, your servant, don't forsake him
    Strike, dear mistress, and cure his heart
    Downy sins of streetlight fancies
    Chase the costumes she shall wear
    Ermine furs adorn the imperious
    Severin, Severin awaits you there
    I am tired, I am weary
    I could sleep for a thousand years
    A thousand dreams that would awake me
    Different colors made of tears
    Kiss the boot of shiny, shiny leather
    Shiny leather in the dark
    Tongue of thongs, the belt that does await you
    Strike, dear mistress, and cure his heart
    Severin, Severin, speak so slightly
    Severin, down on your bended knee
    Taste the whip, in love not given lightly
    Taste the whip, now bleed for me
    I am tired, I am weary
    I could sleep for a thousand years
    A thousand dreams that would awake me
    Different colors made of tears
    Shiny, shiny, shiny boots of leather
    Whiplash girl child in the dark
    Severin, your servant comes in bells
    please don't forsake him
    Strike, dear mistress, and cure his heart

    It feels as if the whole of life is comprised in this rather erotic imagination. Thanks T.Clark, for giving me this opportunity to spread the word. It's the velvet underground, by the way. With that incredibly long aching end.
  • T Clark
    13.9k
    I don't really like this poem that much, but I love the way it feels in my mouth when I read it out loud.

    Laughing Song - William Blake

    When the green woods laugh with the voice of joy,
    And the dimpling stream runs laughing by;
    When the air does laugh with our merry wit,
    And the green hill laughs with the noise of it;
    When the meadows laugh with lively green,
    And the grasshopper laughs in the merry scene,
    When Mary and Susan and Emily
    With their sweet round mouths sing "Ha, ha he!"
    When the painted birds laugh in the shade,
    Where our table with cherries and nuts is spread:
    Come live, and be merry, and join with me,
    To sing the sweet chorus of "Ha, ha, he!"


    One funny association for me. The line "When painted birds laugh in the shade" made me think of "The Painted Bird" by Jerzy Kosiński, one of the bleakest novels I've ever read.
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